Minor Distortion
At points, your bass peaks and distorts. You should fix this with a limiter. I can't tell if it's the bass, or the kick, or both at the same time. Either way, it's one of the two and it's a bit unpleasant to hear. It's pretty short and I guess it could be a bit longer, I dunno, you could try to add some transitions or something, but that's all up to you. Overall, it was nice. I disliked the fadeout in the end.